Thursday, August 04, 2005

dawn

Dawn on artichoke
heart, facile the glittering
sound of glee. Red

trumpets tell of your
night: layered sting
and barrell tricks under

a dangerously low moon.
The ocean is alive
with salt, bouyant girl,

the best she's ever had
is down too far
for her to reach.

1 Comments:

Blogger Scott Glassman said...

wow, damn, this is good. i'm going to write "adjacently" to it, not building off your words, but off each line's ideas-- see how it goes.

10:11 AM  

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