some more (without punctuation)
rhapsody you
lift down me
whorl surf
splits black grease
exactness circle notes
pearl-middle tonight
in mud you too often
compressed soft
flurries as wheels
broken dawn spreads
too whose cerulean
conch washed commas
but not soundlessly
flicked litter vent debris
hands choral washed
interlocking movement
and it yes now
virgin further & you
used a spiritless axiom
spoken ascend in two
lift down me
whorl surf
splits black grease
exactness circle notes
pearl-middle tonight
in mud you too often
compressed soft
flurries as wheels
broken dawn spreads
too whose cerulean
conch washed commas
but not soundlessly
flicked litter vent debris
hands choral washed
interlocking movement
and it yes now
virgin further & you
used a spiritless axiom
spoken ascend in two
posted by Scott Glassman at 12:08 PM
1 Comments:
i took out the punctuation, see what you think. i like how the onus then falls more on the reader to make their own stops and starts. again, enjoyed how you cut it from the block
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