fabric
I wanted to try what you've been playing with in your site, scott. Here's my first attempt, though I think I can do better.
fabric
glow paper
a red match
finding glitter
bringing me there
denim eyes
hook and eye
your eye
stay the white
your pockets
emptied and gone
sell me
sell me fire
garlic quilt
you sweat clean
strips in
flowers, purple bundles
hates smallness
wants to taste
and find
fabric and taste
posted by Unknown at 9:52 AM
1 Comments:
Kenzie, I like this best when the fabric is the object of some magical action, or disfigured in an unusual way. The ones below are the strongest for me, and the second "denim hook and eye" stanza is also very nice.
fabric
garlic quilt
you sweat clean
fabric
strips in
flowers, purple bundles
fabric
hates smallness
wants to taste
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