Spear Atmosphere
dares) that you have given
sound a spine, brought
into stitches of hair,
dust, wool. Clay is red
clay in a river bed awake
and speak. Clouding
lifts my eyelids,
pupils and Saturn
ecstasy out of lime
seeds, small yellow
city on your breastplate.
Begin again
and collapse, a spitting
wind in a slew
for flashbulbs. Pop. Smoke.
the planets.
3 Comments:
Nice. I really like this part:
We carve
ecstasy out of lime
seeds, small yellow
breath-puff, a crystal
city on your breastplate
Very beautiful. Okay, I'm off to get those poems ready for Iowa.
you go on with your bad self :) I sent a batch this weekend as well. I figure it's better to get in early. . .
i agree, early is good :-) and with the rejections coming in-- one from Cold Mountain Review yesterday--, i need to have stuff out there to feel a sense of possibility
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