Friday, August 26, 2005

Spear Atmosphere

I dare to say (as the approaching comet
dares) that you have given
sound a spine, brought

me given me
into stitches of hair,
dust, wool. Clay is red

your tongue is red
clay in a river bed awake
and speak. Clouding

over, the black thread
lifts my eyelids,
pupils and Saturn

unlike any moon. We carve
ecstasy out of lime
seeds, small yellow

breath-puff, a crystal
city on your breastplate.
Begin again

as the rain comes. It’s perfection
and collapse, a spitting
wind in a slew

of lightning bolts mistaken
for flashbulbs. Pop. Smoke.

Blue spots with trails among
the planets.

3 Comments:

Blogger Scott Glassman said...

Nice. I really like this part:

We carve
ecstasy out of lime
seeds, small yellow

breath-puff, a crystal
city on your breastplate

Very beautiful. Okay, I'm off to get those poems ready for Iowa.

9:59 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

you go on with your bad self :) I sent a batch this weekend as well. I figure it's better to get in early. . .

2:36 PM  
Blogger Scott Glassman said...

i agree, early is good :-) and with the rejections coming in-- one from Cold Mountain Review yesterday--, i need to have stuff out there to feel a sense of possibility

3:18 PM  

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