what distance could we contrive
against the image of goldenshower
to the fallible mists purpling
untying knots of fountainspray
friezes, what would you and i
unravel after we read the gaping verb,
mean, if somehow the ridges of
an asterisk became a planet, if
yesterday grew into us, scaling
splendor back into its vertebrae,
off our overturned wrists like
burgeoning gardenias. Singular helix of
iced-over fountains/free from
spectators and ice. Give me
Reading's foliage/that collage
of sacrificial arteries, your eyelashes
brimming with winter, auburns
already were blood and bark
stifled sealed over pockets we
label a yellow bruise as "dying"
sprint down toward, if i can find
you there and we can make a blaze
the stars would notice, isn't that
climbing and interruption the purest
speck of desire, your saliva sparkling
on my cheek in silent shame,
the only necessary even-quiet,
ever-filtered gallow
fleeting, as premise, preface
artificial mapping of,
to reflection?
against the image of goldenshower
to the fallible mists purpling
untying knots of fountainspray
friezes, what would you and i
unravel after we read the gaping verb,
mean, if somehow the ridges of
an asterisk became a planet, if
yesterday grew into us, scaling
splendor back into its vertebrae,
off our overturned wrists like
burgeoning gardenias. Singular helix of
iced-over fountains/free from
spectators and ice. Give me
Reading's foliage/that collage
of sacrificial arteries, your eyelashes
brimming with winter, auburns
already were blood and bark
stifled sealed over pockets we
label a yellow bruise as "dying"
sprint down toward, if i can find
you there and we can make a blaze
the stars would notice, isn't that
climbing and interruption the purest
speck of desire, your saliva sparkling
on my cheek in silent shame,
the only necessary even-quiet,
ever-filtered gallow
fleeting, as premise, preface
artificial mapping of,
to reflection?
1 Comments:
Scott-
I copied and pasted your poem into my editor and inserted lines between yours, pretty much alternating every other line with you, except for the "stars" tercet, which I left intact and followed with a tercet of my own. Talk about collaborative. I'm pretty excited about it. i think it's pretty.
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